From 2e3a0f3b0444866c85b7e2631e2e2d300dfd26c8 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: "nethack.rankin" Date: Tue, 7 Apr 2009 19:42:26 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] quest.txt Astral Plane "Astral plane" is a place name so should be fully capitalized. Some of the variations used ("through the elemental planes to the astral", "plane of the astral", "planes of the elements") aren't as clear cut, but I capitalized all of those I found. --- dat/quest.txt | 22 +++++++++++----------- 1 file changed, 11 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-) diff --git a/dat/quest.txt b/dat/quest.txt index f66fc8698..48148bcd4 100644 --- a/dat/quest.txt +++ b/dat/quest.txt @@ -283,7 +283,7 @@ regain the Amulet of Yendor for %d?" the Wizard and the minions of Moloch. Now, you must embark on one final adventure. -"Take the Amulet, and find your way onto the astral plane. +"Take the Amulet, and find your way onto the Astral Plane. There you must find the altar of %d and sacrifice the Amulet on that altar to fulfill your destiny. @@ -1073,8 +1073,8 @@ absence, yes? How fare you upon your quest for the Amulet?" %Cc Hea 00091 "Ah, you have recovered the Amulet, %p. Well done! -"Now, you should know that you must travel through the elemental planes -to the astral, and there return the Amulet to %d. Go forth and +"Now, you should know that you must travel through the Elemental Planes +to the Astral, and there return the Amulet to %d. Go forth and may our prayers be as a wind upon your back." %E # @@ -1316,10 +1316,10 @@ return through the magic portal that brought thee here." %E %Cc Kni 00091 "Thou hast succeeded, We see, %p! Now thou art commanded to take -the Amulet to be sacrificed to %d in the plane of the astral. +the Amulet to be sacrificed to %d in the Plane of the Astral. "Merlin hath counseled Us that thou must travel always upwards through -the planes of the elements, to achieve this goal. +the Planes of the Elements, to achieve this goal. "Go with %d, %p." %E @@ -1560,7 +1560,7 @@ that brought you here." %Cc Mon 00091 "You have prevailed, %p! %d is surely with you. Now, you must take the amulet, and sacrifice it on %ds altar on -the Astral plane. I suspect that I shall never see you again in this +the Astral Plane. I suspect that I shall never see you again in this life, but I hope to at %ds feet." %E # @@ -1806,7 +1806,7 @@ that brought you here." %Cc Pri 00091 "You have prevailed, %p! %d is surely with you. Now, you must take the amulet, and sacrifice it on %ds altar on -the Astral plane. I suspect that I shall never see you again in this +the Astral Plane. I suspect that I shall never see you again in this life, but I hope to at %ds feet." %E # @@ -2307,7 +2307,7 @@ is yours for the asking." "I see that with your abilities, and my brains, we could rule this world. "All that we would need to be all-powerful is for you to take that little -trinket you've got there up to the Astral plane. From there, %d will +trinket you've got there up to the Astral Plane. From there, %d will show you what to do with it. Once that's done, we will be invincible!" %E # @@ -3055,7 +3055,7 @@ your search for the Amulet as I have wished. How do you fare?" "Excellent, %p. I see you have recovered the Amulet! "You must take the Amulet to the Great Temple of %d, on the Astral -plane. There you must offer the Amulet to %d. +Plane. There you must offer the Amulet to %d. "Go now, my %S. I cannot tell you your fate, as the power of the Amulet interferes with mine. I hope for your success." @@ -3310,9 +3310,9 @@ So, have you succeeded in your quest for the Amulet of Yendor?" "Congratulations, %p. I always knew that if anyone could succeed in defeating the Wizard of Yendor and his minions, it would be you. -"Go now, and take the Amulet to the astral plane. Once there, present +"Go now, and take the Amulet to the Astral Plane. Once there, present the Amulet on the altar of %d. Along the way you shall pass through the -four elemental planes. These planes are like nothing you have ever +four Elemental Planes. These planes are like nothing you have ever experienced before, so be prepared! "For this you were born, %s! I am very proud of you."