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I initially went in here to change the description of "unreadable" text
on the card, since it has been possible to read it in-game since commit
870b124 in 2015.  Then I also ended up making some edits to stylistic
issues I noticed, primarily varying vocabulary to eliminate the
repetition/reuse of words in phrases like "an /ancient/ artifact...
inscribed with /ancient/ runes" and "when /carried/, it grants the one
who /carries/ it ESP, and reduces all spell damage done to the
/carrier/".  The result is a little bit tighter and I think reads
somehwat better.
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Michael Meyer
2023-12-15 12:30:50 -05:00
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platinum yendorian express card
This is an ancient artifact made of an unknown material. It
is rectangular in shape, very thin, and inscribed with
unreadable ancient runes. When carried, it grants the one
who carries it ESP, and reduces all spell induced damage done to
the carrier by half. It also protects from magic missile
attacks. Finally, its power is such that when invoked, it
can charge other objects.
is rectangular in shape, very thin, and inscribed with archaic
runes of power. When carried, it grants the bearer ESP, reduces
incoming damage from spells by half, and protects from magic
missile attacks. Additionally, its power is such that when
invoked, it can charge other objects.
# playing style, rather vague topic but these quotes are too apt to pass up
player
play* style