From 6f6f74e8d2207a1f6f8b99abbc67368545da3470 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: nhmall Date: Sun, 13 Dec 2015 21:45:08 -0500 Subject: [PATCH] slightly change quickmimic() sense wording Changes to be committed: modified: doc/fixes36.1 modified: src/dogmove.c A bug reporter wrote: > comments: > "You sense a little dog appear where Poes was!" > > seems strange to me, perhaps it should be "appearing", or the hero shouldn't > notice at all if it's out of sight. > > Not sure it was out of sight, anyway, because I saw the d from the shop > doorway. > Change the wording to: "You sense that a little dog has appeared where Poes was!" --- doc/fixes36.1 | 1 + src/dogmove.c | 8 +++++--- 2 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/doc/fixes36.1 b/doc/fixes36.1 index e9d8a81bf..d68a7abf2 100644 --- a/doc/fixes36.1 +++ b/doc/fixes36.1 @@ -26,6 +26,7 @@ wrong message given when high priest on astral plane rejects being assigned a name (got the one for unique monsters instead of the one for priests) negative intrinsic protection shouldn't confer MC=1, "you are warded" (not possible from divine protection but is possible from eating rings) +make a slight adjustment to the quickmimic() sense wording Platform- and/or Interface-Specific Fixes diff --git a/src/dogmove.c b/src/dogmove.c index 36e6c4a41..472e3e416 100644 --- a/src/dogmove.c +++ b/src/dogmove.c @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -/* NetHack 3.6 dogmove.c $NHDT-Date: 1446604109 2015/11/04 02:28:29 $ $NHDT-Branch: master $:$NHDT-Revision: 1.56 $ */ +/* NetHack 3.6 dogmove.c $NHDT-Date: 1450061092 2015/12/14 02:44:52 $ $NHDT-Branch: NetHack-3.6.0 $:$NHDT-Revision: 1.57 $ */ /* Copyright (c) Stichting Mathematisch Centrum, Amsterdam, 1985. */ /* NetHack may be freely redistributed. See license for details. */ @@ -1094,8 +1094,8 @@ struct monst *mtmp; (on the other hand, perhaps you're sensing a brief glimpse of its mind as it changes form) */ newsym(mtmp->mx, mtmp->my); - You("%s %s appear where %s was!", - cansee(mtmp->mx, mtmp->my) ? "see" : "sense", + You("%s %s %sappear%s where %s was!", + cansee(mtmp->mx, mtmp->my) ? "see" : "sense that", (mtmp->m_ap_type == M_AP_FURNITURE) ? an(defsyms[mtmp->mappearance].explanation) : (mtmp->m_ap_type == M_AP_OBJECT @@ -1107,6 +1107,8 @@ struct monst *mtmp; : (mtmp->m_ap_type == M_AP_MONSTER) ? an(mons[mtmp->mappearance].mname) : something, + cansee(mtmp->mx, mtmp->my) ? "" : "has ", + cansee(mtmp->mx, mtmp->my) ? "" : "ed", buf); display_nhwindow(WIN_MAP, TRUE); }