Tribute: Feet of Clay
Add a page citation for passage #1 and change the wording of that passage to match the book: the second "does not need" should be "doesn't even need". Also make the comments about various added passages (for other books) be more consistent.
This commit is contained in:
@@ -122,6 +122,7 @@ tribute (Discworld snippets) typos, in book order rather than fix order:
|
||||
Men at Arms passage #1, italicize /for/, passage #2, insert omitted
|
||||
word "had": 'it was /fate/ that _had_ let Edward'
|
||||
Interesting Times passage #1, italicize several words
|
||||
Feet of Clay passage #1, "does not need" -> "doesn't even need"
|
||||
Hogfather passage #7 missing initial double quote for "Oh, just ...",
|
||||
also #7 insert missing "you" into "Why are you feeling [...]"
|
||||
Soul Music passage #1, italicize /feel/, #8, "fossile" -> "fossil"
|
||||
|
||||
Reference in New Issue
Block a user