Tribute: Feet of Clay

Add a page citation for passage #1 and change the wording of that
passage to match the book:  the second "does not need" should be
"doesn't even need".

Also make the comments about various added passages (for other
books) be more consistent.
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@@ -122,6 +122,7 @@ tribute (Discworld snippets) typos, in book order rather than fix order:
Men at Arms passage #1, italicize /for/, passage #2, insert omitted
word "had": 'it was /fate/ that _had_ let Edward'
Interesting Times passage #1, italicize several words
Feet of Clay passage #1, "does not need" -> "doesn't even need"
Hogfather passage #7 missing initial double quote for "Oh, just ...",
also #7 insert missing "you" into "Why are you feeling [...]"
Soul Music passage #1, italicize /feel/, #8, "fossile" -> "fossil"