M144: grammar bit in guidebook
Agree with the reporter that 'norm to which' reads better.
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both riches and danger.
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both riches and danger.
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\fIHumans\fP are by far the most common race of the surface world, and
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\fIHumans\fP are by far the most common race of the surface world, and
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are thus the norm by which other races are often compared. Although
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are thus the norm to which other races are often compared. Although
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they have no special abilities, they can succeed in any role.
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they have no special abilities, they can succeed in any role.
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\fIOrcs\fP are a cruel and barbaric race that hate every living thing
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\fIOrcs\fP are a cruel and barbaric race that hate every living thing
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\begin{document}
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% $Revision: 1.93 $ $Date: 2005/06/01 04:11:55 $
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% $Revision: 1.94 $ $Date: 2005/11/27 04:04:20 $
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are by far the most common race of the surface world, and
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are by far the most common race of the surface world, and
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are thus the norm by which other races are often compared. Although
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are thus the norm to which other races are often compared. Although
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they have no special abilities, they can succeed in any role.
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they have no special abilities, they can succeed in any role.
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