tribute: Small Gods
Add page number citations for the first two passages and add three new passages. That brings the total for Small Gods up to 15 which is a bit on the high side, but they all seemed worthy. While in there, fix a transcription mistake in Lords and Ladies #7: "to" should be "be". And two fixes for Jingo #11's footnote, change "genious" to "genius", remove second "was" from "was, oddly enough, was one [...]". Also, add a comment about the Amazing Maurice. I've tried to bring the fixes37.0 entries about tribute fixes up to date. They're mostly minor and mostly neglected to include updates for that.
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@@ -2984,15 +2984,22 @@ The witches watched with interest.
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%title Small Gods (12)
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%title Small Gods (15)
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# p. 174 (Harper Torch edition; passage starts mid-paragraph; speaker is
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# the blind philosopher Didactylos referring to a book in scroll
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# form called /On Religion/ by another philosopher, Abraxas;
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# Didactylos mentions that Old 'Charcoal' Abraxas had been hit by
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# lightning 15 times)
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%passage 1
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He says gods like to see an atheist around. Gives them something to aim at.
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"[...] He says gods like to see an atheist around. Gives them something
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to aim at."
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[Small Gods, by Terry Pratchett]
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%e passage
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# p. 79 (passage starts mid-paragraph; speaker is Cut-Me-Own-Hand-Off Dhblah)
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%passage 2
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Pets are always a great help in times of stress. And in times of starvation
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too, o'course.
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[...] "Pets are always a great help in times of stress. And in times of
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starvation too, o'course."
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[Small Gods, by Terry Pratchett]
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%e passage
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@@ -3191,6 +3198,35 @@ But, on the whole, there are worse places to be buried than inside a lion.
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[Small Gods, by Terry Pratchett]
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%e passage
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#
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# 3 more passages added for 3.7
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# p. 7 (Brother Nhumrod is in charge of a group of novices; he's thinking
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# about one of them, Brutha, the main character of the story)
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%passage 13
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There was something creepy about the boy, Nhumrod thought. It was the way
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he looked at you when you were talking, as if he was /listening/.
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[Small Gods, by Terry Pratchett]
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%e passage
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# p. 11 (musing by the Great God Om)
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%passage 14
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The trouble with being a god is that you've got no one to pray to.
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[Small Gods, by Terry Pratchett]
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%e passage
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# p. 210 (speaker is Didactylos the Ephebian philosopher)
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%passage 15
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"Life in this world," he said, "is, as it were, a sojourn in a cave. What
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can we know of reality? For all we see of the true nature of existence
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is, shall we say, no more than bewildering and amusing shadows cast upon
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the inner wall of the cave by the unseen blinding light of absolute truth,
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from which we may or may not deduce some glimmer of veracity, and we as
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troglodyte seekers of wisdom can only lift our voices to the unseen and
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say, humbly, 'Go on, do Deformed Rabbit... it's my favorite.'"
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[Small Gods, by Terry Pratchett]
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%e passage
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%e title
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#
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#
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@@ -3215,7 +3251,7 @@ Elves are bad.
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[Lords and Ladies, by Terry Pratchett]
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%e passage
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# p. 32
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# p. 32 (talking about Magrat who has married Verence, Lancre's new king)
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%passage 2
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"Hope she does all right as queen," said Nanny.
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@@ -3326,7 +3362,7 @@ Younger witches, on the other hand, talk about it all the time and believe
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it involves crystals, mystic forces, and dancing about without yer drawers
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on.
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Everyone may to right, all at the same time. That's the thing about
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Everyone may be right, all at the same time. That's the thing about
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quantum.
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[Lords and Ladies, by Terry Pratchett]
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@@ -5061,8 +5097,8 @@ Patrician up the ladder.
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called it the Going-Under-the-Water-Safely Device," said Leonard, behind
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him.(1) "But usually I just think of it as the boat."
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(1) Thinking up good names was, oddly enough, was one area where Leonard
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of Quirm's genious tended to give up.
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(1) Thinking up good names was, oddly enough, one area where Leonard of
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Quirm's genius tended to give up.
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[Jingo, by Terry Pratchett]
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%e passage
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@@ -5975,6 +6011,12 @@ betray 'em, quick as a wink. 'Cos that's villaining.'
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# which is awarded for best children's book of the year.
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# (The other Young Adult Discworld books are the five Tiffany Aching ones.)
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#
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# "Mr so-called Amazing Maurice and His Educated Rodents!" (the characters
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# rather than the book named for them) were first mentioned--in passing
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# rather than part of the story--about 1/3 of the way through _Reaper_Man_.
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# (p. 115, ROC edition; the text there does capitalize 'His'; 'Mr' without
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# period is accurate; the exclamation is derogatory).
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#
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# _The_Amazing_Maurice..._ may well be the most serious Discworld book.
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# (Don't worry, it has lots of humor/humour in it....)
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#
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@@ -110,7 +110,23 @@ correctly account for fuel remaining when lit candles are attached
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there were 15 or fewer turns remaining)
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praying on an unaligned altar outside of Gehennom behaved like an ordinary
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prayer; make that always fail
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Discworld typo: Moving Pictures passage 12 "or" -> "of"
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tribute (Discworld snippets) typos, in book order rather than fix order:
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Sourcery passage #4 "the moment the words were out of your mouth" ->
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"the moment and the words out of your mouth" where "were" didn't
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belong and awkward phrasing because of it caused "and" to be removed
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(would be much clearer if optional comma after "moment" was included)
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Moving Pictures passage #10 initial single quote should be double,
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#12 "or" -> "of", #14 second instance of "megalomaniac" misspelled
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Lords and Ladies passage #5, near end add missing opening double
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quote, passage #7 last paragraph, "to" -> "be"
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Hogfather passage #7 missing initial double quote for "Oh, just ...",
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also #7 insert missing "you" into "Why are you feeling [...]"
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Jingo passage #2 "Vines" -> "Vimes", "profferred" -> "proffered",
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missing opening single quote on second sentence of Lord Downey's
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line, passage #11 both in footnote: "genious" -> "genius",
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"was, oddly enough, was one [...]" -> "was, oddly enough, one [...]"
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A Hat Full of Sky passage #9 "though" -> "thought"
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various, including Death quotes: separate sentences by two spaces
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unicorn corpses and wraith corpses could be sacrificed even if "too old"
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hero polymorphed into a hider and hiding was not unhidden when teleporting
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impose tighter restraints on 'summon nasties', both for spellcasting monsters
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@@ -925,6 +941,7 @@ menu_shift_left, menu_shift_right menu command keys; default '{' and '}'
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using 'f' while quiver is empty and 'autoquiver' is Off when wielding a
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thrown-and-return weapon will throw that weapon instead of filling
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the quiver (inspired by xNetHack)
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3.6's tribute: add one new passage to Sourcery, three to Small Gods
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