tribute: Small Gods

Add page number citations for the first two passages and add three
new passages.  That brings the total for Small Gods up to 15 which
is a bit on the high side, but they all seemed worthy.

While in there, fix a transcription mistake in Lords and Ladies #7:
"to" should be "be".

And two fixes for Jingo #11's footnote, change "genious" to "genius",
remove second "was" from "was, oddly enough, was one [...]".

Also, add a comment about the Amazing Maurice.

I've tried to bring the fixes37.0 entries about tribute fixes up to
date.  They're mostly minor and mostly neglected to include updates
for that.
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@@ -110,7 +110,23 @@ correctly account for fuel remaining when lit candles are attached
there were 15 or fewer turns remaining)
praying on an unaligned altar outside of Gehennom behaved like an ordinary
prayer; make that always fail
Discworld typo: Moving Pictures passage 12 "or" -> "of"
tribute (Discworld snippets) typos, in book order rather than fix order:
Sourcery passage #4 "the moment the words were out of your mouth" ->
"the moment and the words out of your mouth" where "were" didn't
belong and awkward phrasing because of it caused "and" to be removed
(would be much clearer if optional comma after "moment" was included)
Moving Pictures passage #10 initial single quote should be double,
#12 "or" -> "of", #14 second instance of "megalomaniac" misspelled
Lords and Ladies passage #5, near end add missing opening double
quote, passage #7 last paragraph, "to" -> "be"
Hogfather passage #7 missing initial double quote for "Oh, just ...",
also #7 insert missing "you" into "Why are you feeling [...]"
Jingo passage #2 "Vines" -> "Vimes", "profferred" -> "proffered",
missing opening single quote on second sentence of Lord Downey's
line, passage #11 both in footnote: "genious" -> "genius",
"was, oddly enough, was one [...]" -> "was, oddly enough, one [...]"
A Hat Full of Sky passage #9 "though" -> "thought"
various, including Death quotes: separate sentences by two spaces
unicorn corpses and wraith corpses could be sacrificed even if "too old"
hero polymorphed into a hider and hiding was not unhidden when teleporting
impose tighter restraints on 'summon nasties', both for spellcasting monsters
@@ -925,6 +941,7 @@ menu_shift_left, menu_shift_right menu command keys; default '{' and '}'
using 'f' while quiver is empty and 'autoquiver' is Off when wielding a
thrown-and-return weapon will throw that weapon instead of filling
the quiver (inspired by xNetHack)
3.6's tribute: add one new passage to Sourcery, three to Small Gods
Platform- and/or Interface-Specific New Features