Michael Meyer 3025e05579 Copyedit PYEC encyclopedia entry ...

I initially went in here to change the description of "unreadable" text
on the card, since it has been possible to read it in-game since commit
870b124 in 2015.  Then I also ended up making some edits to stylistic
issues I noticed, primarily varying vocabulary to eliminate the
repetition/reuse of words in phrases like "an /ancient/ artifact...
inscribed with /ancient/ runes" and "when /carried/, it grants the one
who /carries/ it ESP, and reduces all spell damage done to the
/carrier/".  The result is a little bit tighter and I think reads
somehwat better.

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